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People are saying on other websites that this book isn’t good, but really, it’s just trying to humor people. This WAS Rachel’s FIRST book, she wouldn’t be perfect at writing, so there could be mistakes. It takes a lot of courage to put forward your story ideas, so would people stop being such critics! This book is for fun, not education! If you want your kids to learn, but them an encyclopaedia! Now that Rachel has written like this, she has to stick with the plot line! That is why she tried to start a new book series, but can you all give it a rest? I think Rachel’s books are great, and if you want to be mean, go and write your own story! Then you can criticise! You people don’t know HOW long it takes to write! You can’t just be all: this book is terrible, blah blah blah! Write an awesome book, then we’ll see! I’m sorry for rambling, and screaming virtually, but I just wanted to get my point across. I hope you considered well, Nintendogirl123 xxx
